I've been sitting here for a few moments with this one. In the few days I've been a member of this site, I've got a chance to sit and read a bit. To put it bluntly, I've read some really good stuff, and some stuff that... wasn't, at least not yet. This is one of the good ones. A very good piece. I think you're reaching here, and pulling it off. Perhaps some poets write because their words or thoughts can't entirely exist outside of poetry, at least not as complete as they might within it. Well done.
I've been sitting here for a few moments with this one. In the few days I've been a member of this site, I've got a chance to sit and read a bit. To put it bluntly, I've read some really good stuff, and some stuff that... wasn't, at least not yet. This is one of the good ones. A very good piece. I think you're reaching here, and pulling it off. Perhaps some poets write because their words or thoughts can't entirely exist outside of poetry, at least not as complete as they might within it. Well done.