The Gene

Beyond Minds.........

   I want to be happy i want to be free but the gene thats inside doesn't want to let me breathe.

There are times when i choose to follow civil order and things in my life go according to plan,but than thats when the gene unravels from inside me and desires me to be free..For the longest time i have been asking myself what is wrong with me,so i surrendered to the god people say can set you free. Growing up i followed the God but in they end it was the gene that took over me.Slowly different aspects of my life started to be affected ,my love life ,my family so i sought to solve the problem once and for all signing up for the military ,telling myself maybe i need to get away.So my journey for seeking the god was on and off until one weekend i started to realize who i have become bringing to question i have been this person all along,a wild spirit indeed,one of no order ,everything is beyond limits and that in life no matter how much you try to escape that desire inside you the gene that conflicts with who you are,  is because who you are is what it wants you to be. I am a living example through my trials and tribulations there was no gene to start with ,iv known what iv wanted all along. Because at they end of the day the only enemy you have is your self. 

    The Gene inside doesn't want to let me breath ,little did i know the gene was me.

Author's Note

A big battle throughout life iv had between me myself and myself.

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

This is great! Very well written, and very nicely put. Just a few things though; I've, not iv, then, not than, and there are spaces after punctuation. This is a very nice poem, something to be proud of.

[Kaylor Mason]

That's a very profound fact of life, and it's true for all of us. Definitely for me. It takes guts to admit that, too--for anyone. This is a really awesome poem. I like that it doesn't rhyme (free-verse); some of the best poems in the world are free-verse. Nice work! :)