Journal To My Soul

 

    Farther i awake this Saturday mourning once again with only worry in my heart and all the wrong things to be thinking about. I pray to you lord to wipe my mine clean of all these things Lord and fully transform my mind into a mind where i only think and trust you oh lord. It seems like when i think of other things that are not

of your will,my life has become that much more complicated. Sexual temptations ,doubt, confusion which i know is not of you. I am expressing to you oh lord the thoughts that are on mind even though i know you already know.Forgive me lord for my transgressions.

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[MomzillaNC]

A lovely and sincere prayer.

There are a few edits, though. Your content is well composed, but there were some typos and grammar errors I've edited for you. And I put it in a layout that's easier to follow (I'm worked as a graphic designer in print media for 25 years). The changes are just suggestions; again, I really like the prayer and the sincerity and humble presentation of your words. I hope you find my suggestions helpful.

Father, I awake this Saturday morning
once again with only worry in my heart
and all the wrong things to be thinking about.
I pray to you, Lord, to wipe my mind clean
of all these things, Lord, and
fully transform my mind into a mind
where I only think and trust you, oh Lord.
It seems when I think of other things,
things not of your will, my life has become
that much more complicate —
Of sexual temptations, doubt, and
confusion, which, I know, is not of you.
I am expressing to you, oh Lord,
the thoughts that are on my mind,
even though I know you already know.
Forgive me, Lord, for my transgressions.

Amen.