Sunlight Through My Window Pane

I toss and turn with no relief

Soon the night goes like a thief

Sunlight pours through my window pane

All it does is give me pain

I must get up and face your wrath

Why can't we take another path

Surely we will never wed

So I stay right here in bed

Sunlight tries to seek my eyes

Still I feel the shaking of my thighs

So much sunlight creeping in

So much Sunlight revealing sin

Sunlight through my window pane

Oh how much you give me pain

Reviews

[Lizardo]

Wow, what they told you is true. You write Great poetry!
I love the flow and the rhyming of the poem but by far my favorite is the meaning of the poem.
So many true metaphors too.
"So much sunlight creeping in

So much Sunlight revealing sin"
Those lines just left me without words
Great piece of poetry, keep on writing!

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It's hard when we don't want the night to end. I love that "...night goes like a thief" - beautiful!

[Michelle Coleman]

So simple and yet it speaks like a thousand words. Awesome. 😊

[Who This]

I seriously had lost hope in poetry a long time ago, I was under the mindset that all modern works of poetry is utter rubbish. But you my dear has changed that :). While the language itself is commendable in its simplicity and beauty. I love how you took something that all of us have experienced and made it into something really deep in many angles. Great work! Maybe ill try poetry one of these days.

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of story in the poem. It felt like listening to private thoughts and secret places. I like the tone and realistic feel of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote