I Will Not Enter

I walked home

I stood at the door

Still I did not enter

Someone walked by

Someone was home

Still I did not enter

The snow fell

The cold crept inside me

Still I did not enter

Am I nothing, but a ghost?

Am I merely a fly?

Still I did not enter

At least a ghost is in your mind

At least a fly is a nuisance

Still I did not enter

It is dark outside

It is dark inside

You lock the door

I will never enter

Reviews

[Xella Poetry]

This is really good! I love the mysterious and melancholy mood!

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

The edge of be. So powerful your poem and creativity. I will be following yours poem. Thanks for share your talent.

I hope you write more, have a nice day.

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with mystery and possibilities. I like the tone leaving the reader to figure out the situation in the poetry. A very good ending to the excellent poem. I liked the open ending.
Coyote