Sometimes

Hey anybody have sometimeses like these? lol

Sometimes

when I haven't slept in 

oh a day 

or so

My hearts beats

alive

       fast

             faster

like stimulants

while my eyes sting 

to be open.

Sometimes

nights just have that 

special way

of stealing time

Making me feel

Young

          alive

                and reckless

like lightning 

strikes across the sky

in a hot August heat.

Sometimes

he's so easy that I 

just want to

climb in

My leg slides up the khaki shorts

A Star

         I feel

                like a star on these nights.

Sometimes

all the people are here

to be seen

but better when it is all the insiders

being

        inside 

                 each other

experiencing the reckless youth we should have outgrown

so many nights and dawns ago.

Sometimes 

when the sun breaks through

the sky

it is kind of green in color.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Very well woven! It's like a convertable of life driven through a rainy moonlit night, where wine fills the bucket seats. It certainly captures moments of vigor and youth. The flow was perfect and for some odd reason, I got the feeling the last line implied a hanging over with in a porcelain friend.

Great Ink! Fun to read!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Ees]

The ending was oddly enough, quite literal for me. The color that I saw the sky that morning. It is interesting to hear the different takes that I got on that. Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a great review!
Thanks!
Sorry, my time has been eaten a lot lately, just getting around to checking reviews and stuff that have been sitting here for a while.

[Dr. Wood ?]

i sometimes have sometimeses just like this......nightime is underrated in my view

[Ees]

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Most interesting things happen during the nighttime.

[Dr. Wood ?]

very true....there is something about the night that is compelling

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i kinda do yeah....

i am a night owl..and yes, feel rejuvenated in the night...

like a reckless youth...which i was.

nicely done..and relatable...we were all young and green at one time...just like those rare suns.

[Ees]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, as always!
Sorry, just getting back into this...

[David Scott]

Hello again...
I enjoyed the write. You have a sense of youthful joy in this poem. Not sure if the sun was in a 420 haze or not. Green? Ha.
Sometimes when we should crash, we find our wings.

[Ees]

I don't even smoke pot, haha, so no, that's not what I meant by green, I didn't even think of that! haha, I think the sky just was a bit green when I wrote this one.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. So glad that you enjoyed it@