The Hallows Eve Creature of the Night
A Story by EDRC
This story was written by: Ryan.
A Hallows Eve, silent and dark. The sky was covered,
no stars were showing. The only light came from the half covered moon.
The wind danced through the autumn leaves, making a muted sound, causing
a few to fly off of their once beloved homes on the trees.
A graveyard, surrounded by large iron gates, was the only thing
standing beside a short city street. In this small graveyard, were the
bodies of beloved family and friends, who had lost the fight against
death. The gates to this graveyard were closed. No one was allowed to
enter, making it undisturbed and silent.
A young girl walked on the city street right next to it. She avoided
looking at the creepy, silent graveyard. She had a coat, buttoned
tightly against her, and a hood covering her face. Each time the wind
picked up, she would fold her arms against her, and tighten it even
more.
She walked further and
further, she finally went into the woods surrounding the graveyard. She
then pulled out a flashlight, and it shined a dim light, just enough to
see a small dirt path she was following. Finally, the light went out.
The battery was low.
“Dang
it!” The girl cried. She could see nothing before her. Though she
couldn’t see, she still tried to fight her way through the dark woods.
She held her hands out in front of her, making sure she didn’t run into
anything. She continued to follow the unseen path.
About five minutes had past, and the girl was well on her way into the
darkness of the woods. It seemed to have grown darker. All she could see
in front of her was an even deeper darkness; she could only hope she
finds a way out of the woods. Then, a noise came from beside her. She
stopped for a second and listened. Her only conclusion of the noise was
that it was the snap of a twig on the ground, probably from a small
animal crawling by.
Finally,
she decided to continue walking to her destination. The chilly night had
become even colder, the wind was picking up, and she could see in the
distance the flash of lightning, which could only mean that it was
preparing to storm. She then began to walk faster, so that she wouldn’t
have to be out in the storm.
She continued to walk, it was silent and cold. Then, all of a sudden,
she heard the noise again, the sound of a snapping twig.
“Ok, is someone following me,” the girl then asked. She waited for a
reply, but no reply came. “This is a little scary,” she thought to
herself. She continued walking, darker the woods became. Once again she
heard the noise. “Stop,” the girl yelled. The noise was really starting
to scare her. She then went from walking at a fast pace, to a jog.
Then, she heard foot steps; they were very close to her.“Quit chasing me,” The girl screamed. She was now running.
The steps unknown creature behind her was now running as well. She was
scared. Who was chasing her, or even, what? The creature was picking up
its pace. The girl as well began to pick up her pace. They were both
running.
Then, she heard
breathing, and felt warmth on the back of her neck. It was catching up
with her! Its breathing became faster and deeper the further they ran.
Its pace was growing even faster.
“Who are you? Tell me now! I am warning you, I will hurt you,” The girl yelled as she was running.
The breath behind her became even faster, and the creature’s footsteps
were growing nearer. The girl could almost feel the creature touching
her. What was this thing after? Why was it chasing her? The girl was now
running as fast as she possibly could. The creatures speed was picking
up even more. Its breath became warmer, it was close now.
Then, the worst possible thing happened. The girl tripped. She felt a
sharp pain in her ankle; she knew that she had tripped over a root on
the ground. “Ouch!” A scream
of pain came out of the girl’s mouth. The creature’s walking had now
stopped. She could see its tall shadow leaning over her. Its hand was
now getting closer to her face.
“Get away! Please!” The girl was now screaming, with pain and fear.
The creature’s face was now right up against the girl’s. She could tell
it was looking directly into her eyes. She was silent and breathed
deeply. The creature’s warm, deep breath was now blowing into the girls
face. Then, it all became a deep black. The girl could see nothing.
The next day, a team of people began to search for the girl. For weeks
they searched, and she was never found. Finally the people discovered
the last spot the girl had been, a small cloth was left on the ground,
beside it was a boot. This was the boot the girl had worn. There was a
large footprint, unlike any humans. It was shaped in the oddest shape.
Still this very day, no one knows where the girl is, or what had exactly
happened that night. All they know is that the girl was on her way back
to her house from a Halloween party.
The creature is still out there, possibly looking for someone else to
get. So be warned, you could be next! Happy Halloween…
© 2010 EDRC
Author's Note
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Happy Halloween.
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