Yummy! Interesting poem/recipe :) the inconsistent rhyming pattern was different. Thanks for sharing :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Haha yeah I wrote it for fun, didn't really intend for it to be instructional, but ahwell. Lol. Yea .. read moreHaha yeah I wrote it for fun, didn't really intend for it to be instructional, but ahwell. Lol. Yea I don't really like to do simple/ conventional rhyming structures, don't know why, maybe just a quirk.
But no-one's said anything bad about it so far I guess...
Anyway thanks for your review!
8 Years Ago
lol. Don't worry I can relate to that one. Not much simple rhyming either. :)
That's right who doesn't love cookies right? Only thing better is chocolate :P
I think this poem sums up the joys of baking and eating cookies quite well.
Does make you want some just reading this piece.
It is very hard when ur making a cookie mix, or a cake mix, not to want to keep eating all the mixture/dough, it certainly is hard to stop lol.
I enjoyed this because it was to the point, and relatable and about something everyone loves.
Think this poem has made everyone want some cookies. :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Lol yes you are spot on about cookies! Especially about it being hard not to eat the dough. One time.. read moreLol yes you are spot on about cookies! Especially about it being hard not to eat the dough. One time I made cookie dough purely to eat the raw dough (it so damn good). I wrote this poem purely for fun when I was baking with my partner, it just sorta came into my head i just couldn't help but write it down and share.
Thank you for reviewing it, I'm glad you liked it :)
8 Years Ago
Haha me my brother and sister used to eat allot of the dough, mums like don't eat to much of it uz w.. read moreHaha me my brother and sister used to eat allot of the dough, mums like don't eat to much of it uz will be sick haha.
Yer well why not share huh?
I enjoyed reading it :)
Hmmm... you are an old spirit indeed Josiah, this I can most certainly sense... my grandma enjoys baking too hehe ;) very nice poem, way to make me hungry though!
Isn't**** there something awesome about describing and writing about food? Especially "treats" and such? It is fun and makes me hungry. You can be our virtual baker/head dessert artist, haha. Great read brother.