Our Lord

A poem I wrote for encouragement,to inspire myself and others who may grow doubtful...God Bless Always!

When you are weary,so sad,and alone
you feel you haven't any will to go on,
Just give it all to him,its now his fight,
Jesus can come like a thief in the night.

He will hear our prayers either night or day,
if asked in earnest, he's only a prayer away
Just talk to him about your troubles and woes,
cause believe you me, the Lord already knows.

So put your faith in our Dear Lord above,
abundantly you'll have his undying love.
He will always be here,right at your side,
till you travel with him on your Heaven bound ride.


 

 

Author's Note

Hope this gives you peace and inspiration,let me know your true feelings on it!God Bless U !

Reviews

[Wildecat]

I love having Jesus in my corner, well done a pleasure to read this poem.

[J. Hampton]

Very nicely put...

Doubt in its' own way... drives us to our knees...it breaks our own will
and shifts hope off the flesh that breaks us...to God who re-makes us
Love the spirit in which this is written...

"Just give it all to him,its now his fight,"

It's just not our battle...

Blesssssssssssssssss

[Michael X]

This is beautiful, as well as Very well written,
the form, imagery, inspiration, encouragement are uplifting
wonderful spiritual poem, some things are just a blessing
to read, this poem has that effect. Michael

[RachelleB]

I'm not a religious person, but I most definitely believe in God and I pray, and this poem is extremely inspirational....nice words...

R

[vanishing]

first thought.. this piece gives the reader
an uplifting-inspirational feeling.. indeed,
you have a gift for rhyme forms.
such a strength in determination..
Magnificently presented..in form and fashion

[Carl Fraser]

Hi Diana, Its the hope of every believer to take that ride. All tears will be wiped away and poetry and song and praise will flow like a river. Very uplifting Diana...............Blessings, Carl

[Micheal Teal]

We live in a world where more often then not people are confused about what faith is or should be. This beautiful poem is what it should be about - peace , compassion , love and truth. You have written an inspiring tribute to your own personal dogma. I honour and respect who you are and what you believe. Faith should make one a better person and obviously for you it has done just that.

Thank you for sharing this personal prayer. I kneel at the altar of your words.

Well done.

[Rhine Wolf]

Ooo I like this one! all though I do think that some really over the top believers may take offence to Jesus being refered to "a thief in the night" but i say let them think what they want. this is a really inspiring poem!