IN YOUR MIND

IN YOUR MIND

 

Create the world

In your mind

You are maker of

Your destiny

 

As you think

So it becomes

I think

Therefore I am

 

Plan

Work your plan

Admire

Become

 

Plant

Harvest

Sow

Reap

 

Your world

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Brett Moore]

Short and sweet. I relate to this. Well done!

[Holly Mason]

nice piece thank you for sharing it lovely

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A simplistic yet coiled look at this life we live, well done, good read.

[lee von cleef]

On the backs of yours they carried off your world.

[-----]

I enjoyed this - philosophical look at life. Nicely written.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice! Simple yet strong.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This should have been my new years resolution... Awesome motivational thoughts penned here, Eagle! Lovely write!

"As you think

So it becomes

I think

Therefore I am



Plan

Work your plan

Admire

Become" Nicely done!

[AngelEyes15]

i really like this poem it had strong feelings in just a few words. i was feeling down and this lifted me up showing me im in control. great poem. (:

[Tony]

Hiya Ol' Man~!

I was just looking around the site and thought I'd stop by and say howdy....

We'll see you around. :]

[Daniela Jamiso]

I like the "plant, harvest, sow, reap" line, it's true life in a metaphor :) Very good! 100/100 :)