JUST A SIMPLE MELODY

JUST A SIMPLE MELODY

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

 
LIFE IS JUST A SIMPLE MELODY
 
 
Remember that tune
That is life passing by
Life is just a simple Melody
Melancholy
 
Sometimes funny
Often sad
Life is just a simple Melody
Often it`s just a joke
And we`ve been had
 
No that`s not a train
It`s just life passing by
Makes you want to laugh
Instead you cry
 
Can`t forget that tune
You are not alone
Life is just a simple Melody
Song of sins you can`t atone
 
Sit on the curb and whine
The train might whistle past
That was it
Life is gone
We sit here on the curb
And think what might have been
 
She is just a simple Melody
What lingers is not life
All that`s left are just
Fragments of a song
 
----  Eagle Cruagh

© 2012 Eagle Cruagh


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Written with a simple understanding that this is how life is... we must understand and accept the joys and sorrows that come to pass. It is life... many sad moments, but they are there to ensure we acknowledge the good ones too. Enjoy the journey, not the destination... for we all have the same ending here.

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Lots of great lines here. You seemed to cap it all up pretty well, I like your unpretentious style.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reads like a song, a sweet melody of truth and retrospection. Insightful and poignant.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love! Memories as fragments of the melody that is life? Brilliant.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm reveling here. Outstanding work!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Written with a simple understanding that this is how life is... we must understand and accept the joys and sorrows that come to pass. It is life... many sad moments, but they are there to ensure we acknowledge the good ones too. Enjoy the journey, not the destination... for we all have the same ending here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad, sometimes true , like the last line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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