LOVE IN A STREAM

LOVE IN A STREAM

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

This may be what love is all about .

LOVE IN A STREAM

In a stream of consciousness that is
When you wonder out loud about a thing
And hold it up to the light
So you can look with all your might

And ask and pry and check around
Maybe its right here on the ground
That thing you seek and want to know
It may be in her rosy glow

When she likes you and you like her
Nothings hurting and lifes a blur
The sun is warm and the dog is fed
And it`s time for you to be in bed

Then think about today in a store
When a Mommie wiped the nose
of a little child -- I froze
For there was what we all adore

It didn`t come on gossamer wings
From the supernatural kind of things
It was just in that mommies eyes
When she listened to the babies cries

When he took her hand and didn`t stare
At something hot and bare
He just led her to a chair
And made her know that he was there

So I guess it`s not all magic and stuff
It may be just when you have had enough
Of the cruel old world and all that pap
She smiles at you and love was that
----- Eagle Cruagh
 

Reviews

[Who Cares]

This was so beautiful, toughing really. I admire your work, you always bring new ideas to the writing world. The last line really brings out the important message and your flow was wonderful no constant rhyme scheme and that gave a unique feel to this piece nice job :D

[Passion]

Such a captivating, beautiful write. Love can be amazing if we open our minds to what stares us right in the face. The overlooked passion within ourselves, the love that comes in many forms and that can be made aware with a simple act.

[InkingPen]

Beautiful! The last 2 stanzas makes my heart melt!
Wonderful insights in all of your writing.

[koty bell]

very touching and very well written i loved it

[Ruth]

This is so tenderly thought through! Beautiful love...love is sometimes the simplistic of things that can be unseen or taken for granted!
Wonderful xoxo

[olla]

yes.. I like this one very much..

[Wondering Mind]

Love can be that....I enjoyed the flow of this.

[Renée]

Simple and quiet love can come...Sweet ..Simple.. beautiful. write

[Marie]

Yes, this can be love too...

[The White Wolf]

Perfectly beautiful!