BAD HABIT

BAD HABIT

 

Hey, he`s good looking

She`s cute

Aint that just life

Why ?

 

I turn on the puter

Go to 'writers on line"

Or just look at my top ten

Aint they just devine

 

But, I`m looking

Either for the meaning of life

Or, a pretty face

Killing time

 

Everybody does it

Some  are practicing psychology

Others looking for a date

It`s a sorry state

 

Why ?

Is everybody that lonesome?

Unsatisfied ?

Buddha justified life as  being

Say it fast it`s just bing

 

Kant said "you are"

Is that just you`re ?

Everybody`s looking

For something that`s real

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

 

 

Reviews

[Bethany Woody]

Someimes a good dose of reality is what this world needs. Thanks for giving us just that.

[Cassie Fraga]

RAW!!! I like that!! your style flows very easy... great penning my friend!!

[Jasmine]

Is that why you added me then, without reading my work?

Hmmm it is a shame that this happens on WC.

[The Analog Kid]

yeah...there are lots of beautiful blondes with guitars on here for some reason!

[Muse]

it's an epidemic on WC...sad really. And to think....most of these avatars are not real..yet people are desperate to believe what they read and see.

[B.S. Scarpa]

Way to tell the way reality is. Its real thank you for sharing.

[Nona]

I find this piece extremely powerful in revealing the naked truth of the fucked up reality! your epistemological verse is beautiful in its bold confrontation with life! Great job!

[Liza]

every body looking outside of themselves; a bad habit breeds