THE NEW MELODY

 

THE NEW MELODY

 

The first thing

You see

Are eyes

They are the most incredible

violet

 

But then

She has

Everything

And they are unquestionably gorgeously

Curvy

 

The next

Is smile

Luxurious

Brilliant even white sparkling teeth with

Lips

 

Framing them

So

Dramatic

And unequivocally the angel in my dreams

My Angel

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Nona]

I like how simple observations stolen from straightforward fragments of reality create so sophisticated beauty! Great poem!!!!

[jennifer little]

nice work keep up the good work

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hi Eagle, you have beautifully described and written a poem of love.
I like the part about the eyes.. nice one Eagle.

Chloe

[Susanna F]

So sweet and passionate!

[Lilmissfit]

awwwwwww this is such a thoughtfull and sweet poem!!! :)))