RAPT

 

RAPT

 

Feet pounding

Hips pumping

Thighs churning

Fluids flowing

 

Mouths open

Hard breathing

Desperate straining

Every ligament

 

I reach higher

She reaches higher

We max our energy

Plateau climbing

 

Vitals stretched

Maxing vitality

Muscles screaming

COMING DOWN

 

Breath in gasps

Near collapse

The end

Of our running

 

And the beginning

Of our new world

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[olla]

fluttering my feathered fan.. is it warm in here..

[Muse]

This is more like you...glad to see you writing on the lighter side of things again. Interesting title choice. It was a climax just waiting to happen. lol

[J. J. Nightingale]

AND A XXX NOVEL ...

JAZZ ..

[emmajoy]

My goodness me .. well, what do you know! There was me thinking you were being all manly about a boxer and a big fight, then, you go all manly about .. well .. 'and the beginning of our new world' .. clever twist, Mr. C., very clever!

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is a knock out write!!!
A tantalizing read using great choice of words
Totally had my attention from start to finish
Very nicely penned….

[Valentine]

Was this a marathon on the streets or in bed??? I wonder..Nice warm bit of writing..Kathie