IF YOU WANT TO LOVE ME LOVE ME

 

 

IF YOU LOVE ME LOVE ME

 

This is a confusing life

If you want to love me

Love me

Why all this strife

 

Do not be slow to love

Be slow to criticize

If you really love me

Love me

I will see it in your eyes

 

No need to confuse me

Just open up and love

Take your heart and send it

To the one addressed above

 

I will know you by your loving

Keep selfish in your bag

If you really love me love me

I promise not to nag.

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Who Cares]

Your rhyme scheme is creative and your repetition adds power to your words I love it, The first line is a big part of my life right now. Your words are just sooo.... I myself cannot even begin to describe the beauty of your work. So before I put your work to shame with my descriptions that are pale in comparison I shall just end this review. Beyong amazing work :D

[Emily Rae]

a poem about letting go and loving--sweet.
my favorite lines,
"No need to confuse me
Just open up and love
Take your heart and send it
To the one addressed above"

where's the address?