TEAMWORK

TEAMWORK

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

 
TEAMWORK
 
I felt a little silly
For life is but a dream
But when Sweety kissed me
It was all peaches and cream
 
Then she kissed again
Did she make a mistake
What could she gain
By another take
 
Under the covers
Of our humble bed
She tormented me
Until I wished that I were dead
 
Then I remembered
Life Is but a dream
I kissed her back
Til she was `bout to scream
 
Life took new meaning
This was no dream
Life is real where ere you are
When you two make up a team
 
---- Eagle Cruagh
 

© 2012 Eagle Cruagh


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Lord knows it requires teamwork! nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is spicy and sweet at the same time. A little fire and warmth mixed together. The imagery is done very well and hides the privacy of actions under the covers.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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