JUST  AN  OLD  LINE SHACK

JUST AN OLD LINE SHACK

A Story by Eagle Cruagh

 
JUST A LINE SHACK
 
Git go`n Lindy !
Reins slap Lindy on the flank.
It`s been a long time Ole Buddy, we
gotta git home.
 
This ole man has been gone about
70 years and he`s go`n home.
Where`s home ?  It`s just a line shack
about ten mile from Thunder Butte
down on Thunder Butte Creek.
 
What`s a line shack, Dad ?
Oh,  it`s just a little frame house down
on the creek.   I grew up there, then
when I went away to high school, the
ranchers in the area just moved in and
took it over for the cowboys to bunk in
when doing roundup and scout`n strays.
 
What`s so important about it now ?  Why '
go back to an old line shack ?
Git up, Lindy.   Well, son, you know how
important were some of those great days
in your life, the day you graduated from
college, that day you got your MA down
in Texas ?   Well, when Tony Roach and I
found that pool full of wild fish, that was
the same kind of day for me.   Tony told me
they were wild fish and I filled my pockets
full of them and took them home and my
Mother found me emptying all those pollywogs
out on the floor.   That was graduation day
for me.   Boy did I get a whupp`n.  yup, that
was the day I became a man.
 
What else do you remember about that old
shack, Dad ?
Whoa .  That`s a long story son.  Got a few
days to listen ?
 
----- Eagle Cruagh
(to be continued)

© 2011 Eagle Cruagh


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Just sat, feet up on the dog and listening.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good story. Flows along nicely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is going to be a good one. Ha ! Just kidding. I am looking forward to reading this story. Also I love the Pic. Great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

" Boy did I get a whupp`n. yup, that
was the day I became a man."

Haha. That was funny. And yes, I've got few days to listen. :)) This is really fun to read and interesting, so... do more. :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Give a dog a bone! This is f***ing brilliant! See why I'm chewing on this flower...such a dirty mouth. lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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