BUST MY BRITCHES

BUST MY BRITCHES

 

Guess you want to know

Where this comes from

Where it will ever go

Maybe it just comes from

 

Busted britches

That have no place to go

The world`s full of b*****s

That's dogs you know

 

Busted britches is often said

At the round up where steers are bled

Where castrating`s done

Broncs are busted every one

 

When you fork a gnarly bronc

And he goes up that way

And comes down this

You had on your good jeans

But something`s gonna split

 

----- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Maggie]

Wow, what a complicated piece of work this is...brilliant. Good ole cowboy tales are seldom deep, and I applaud you for being able to take the Western lifestyle to a new level once again.

[paparapapa]

"The world`s full of b*****s
That's dogs you know"

=))))) I love your writing style! So keep on writing! Haha.

[Liza]

i love the b***h that gave birth to my Turbo
that's about all that this piece inspired for this review :)

[Hanan_Maliah]

very interesting write....I expect you have a few different ideas running with this...

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i liked this piece...you have a unique way of writing and it is wonderful...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stirring and odd. You write my kind of poetry.

[Lily Mae]

I love your unique style and way with words. This made me smile.. excellent write..xx

[Greg the Bard]

I only hope you didn't get busted by that b***h!! Did you get a new pair of jeans? Great write and great form. The image moves with the very straight forward story.

[EMF]

Such wonderful wordplay that can't help but bring a smile to my face. Add to that it's a terriffic poem. Your talent gets stronger with each write and read.