FREAKS

FREAKS

 

Some us freaky types just

write BIG

Others just look big,

No, not that

Some of us talk `bout grown

stuff

And some of us had enough

 

Some curl their hair

Some shave down there

Others don`t like ice cream

And some just make you scream

 

I don`t quite know what to say

Them freaky freaks are here to stay

I saw one really FREAKY

It was me in the looking glass

 

CREDIT:

All credit for this piece should

go to Emily Burns, it was her

freaky idea that inspired this .

----- Eagle Cruagh

 

Reviews

[Emily Rae]

interesting

[africa]

Wow. You got the flow really good here. Great and good on you.

[paparapapa]

Hahaha. Funny Poem and funny credit. :))

"I saw one really freaky" :)) we always throw this joke to just anyone like our friends. But it's funnier when you say it to yourself. =))

Loved it. :)

[Sara Rincon]

Ha, very nice. I like this a lot. Bouncy and fun. One question though: In
"curl there hair" - is 'there' done on purpose?

[Kenneth The Poet]

Freaktastic indeed.

[absolutefolie]

This made me laugh, awesome poem. Nice job :)

[Tony]

This is real good, and pretty dang funny, whether you primp with pubic hair or not!

Hey!
How come you don't put some of these over at ...you know... over at the bar?..lol...
Them girls would get a kick out of you.
I know, I give them more of my time and so forth, but hey,
I'm freaky like that.

[Muse]

Freaky...hairy...scary indeed!

[Crow]

LOL, a most desperately needed laugh, for this wonderfully jovial piece.

I truly enjoyed this read.

[Daytonight]

Very cute! Brought a smile to my face. Keep up the great work!