SEND ME A LETTER

 

SEND ME A LETTER

 

I`ll  tell you a little tale

And I`ll send it by mail

And then you`ll be much wiser

 

Love is a crock

It is a figment

People have an ache

And that`s not it

 

Send me a letter

Poor me I been hurt

Kiss me you fool

You`re poorer than dirt

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

This left a smile on my face. Definitely a great poem. It really made me laugh, and I agree with Lydia that you nailed it perfectly. Your poem structure was good, and it flowed naturally. I don't see where I would improve upon it.

[Hayley]

Hmm I'll be back to review this one... Let me think on it :)
PS I agree with arbitrary jane on this one, it definitely has that "last-drink-before-closing-time feel to it."

[Lydia Blackwell]

ha! talk about nailing it!
my fav line is :

People have an ache
And that`s not it

yes!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

SMILE, love the meaning of this! Love it!

[Raven Starhawk]

Quite charming and enlightening. I am glad I read this today. It helped paint a smile upon my face and struck a new sense of readiness.

[arbitrary jane]

amen.

we're all poorer than dirt.
(and richer than earth. )
love is a crock.
(and love is the only thing that matters. )

this one has a last-drink-before-closing-time feel to it.

[stars are far]

this is so nice
i loved that :)

[EMF]

I have spent ten minutes laughing and reading this out to everyone who's passed through the cafe. Brilliant work. Ironic, dripping with sarcastic juice and glowing with irritability. I loved it. Love it.

[Kat Collins]

Too rich! I love the dripping sarcasm...oh poor me...poor you! Is it a casual disregard for human feelings or an irritation because of hearing woe is me so much? I've been in both places...love it!

[Allen Smuckler]

a chuckle and a chortle...
Little cynical, Eagle....but I get it
maybe it's just agita...
:)
allen