LOST

Thursday, November 11, 2010

LOST

LOST

Somewhere it rests
Hidden in a little nest
Plebian as my soul
Nada as a goal

Find her
I beg you
She is gone for sure
Find her and I shall endure

You will know her
When she erupts
Sense of humor gone
It was just a pup

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted by agudwun at

eaglecruagh.com

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was so Great! I loved the first stanza! great write!!

[Norma M Sutton]

This is nice, sad, but nice.

[Katseye]

Interesting... I find I want to know more.... what is it? who is she?

[Poetic Beauty]

My favorite stanza is

Find her
I beg you
She is gone for sure
Find her and I shall endure

It has a bit of a romantic feel. the flow of this poem is smooth and easy to read.

[Liza]

somehow it doesn't seem like its lost
a different horizon found in this write
nice flow
missed reading you!

[justice]

Short. Nice. Flowing. I found that it ended a little abruptly for me. I was expecting more, a conclusion. Was it found? What was it? So many unanswered questions. This may be a good thing! haha. Thank you for sharing this poem, it was most enjoyable.