POMP AND ACRIMONY

POMP AND ACRIMONY

 

My blonde and budding love

Bleeds her  heart for thee

My one and only love

Who may just live for me

 

Kill the mockingbird

Or any bird will do

Please don`t kill my love

It just lives for you

 

Ode to might have been

There are all the others

Bleeding hearts will win

This one has been smothered 

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Moonflower]

This is written with skill. Lovely work, doll.

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simple, yet evokes the emotions beautifully..lovely

This is a brilliant write
the flow was great
the words all right
there is nothing i could add
to this wonderful write
you tell you tale too well, dear sir
for there is nothing here to critique
perhaps i could instead infer
that perhaps the story was to short
per chance i might want more of this?
You would have me
this i know for certain,
leave this piece and wait
for you to draw back a curtain
on another tale of love, betrayal,
and something more steamy?

~CFB (Writing this was a whole heap of fun)

[Ashley.M.E]

Kill the mockingbird

I love this saying, though I had to read the book this year... which it was boring, but I loved the meaning in the end. I love the poem all together. Nicely put.

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

this is a nice piece. short and to the point. yet full of meaning and a great piece. i like it. you did a good job with the rhyming as well. it's hard to pull that off sometimes, but you did it beautifully.

[Wicahpi]

Short and Kind of Sarcastic,
yet hopeful and playful in a sinister
kind of way.

"Bleeding hearts will win" I hope
The 2nd stanza is my favorite.

I've always found that image sad.
I like how you express so much with less.

~ Wicahpi

[Norma M Sutton]

I like this one. You have a very small typo on the second line. It's a double space between her and heart. Interesting to refer to love as a lady.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I like this one, is lyrical and a bit of the ole Victoria.. I like that.