YUR BUTEFUL LIKE THE FLARS

YUR BUTEFUL LIKE THE FLARS

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

YUR BUTEIFUL LIKE THE FLARS
 
Yur beautiful like the flars of spring
Did I tell you `bout yur silphlike frame
Those lips like rosebuds in the garden
Oh, my so much bursting love it came
 
A scented breeze touched you then me
Birds warbling love songs in a tree
Bees buzzing honey, honey bee
Just makes you wanta be freeeeee
 
Don`t hate me `cause I`m beautiful
Just because I got a lisp
All this beautiful is just my way
Of get`n a cowboy pissed
 
---- Eagle Cruagh

© 2011 Eagle Cruagh


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Forgive the changes please.
You tell me how it`s wrong and
I`ll keep trying to make it better.
----- Eagle

Posted 13 Years Ago


what a pleasure to read such an ingenious and witty arrangement so abounding with character~~much enjoyed~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much fun... this one is like candy..no sugar lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

big smiles for this one! Love the sentiment in this one...!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol I like the humor in this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

err my first thought is "Cheers" have another drink on me! hahaha
I like 'Birds warbling love songs in a tree, Bees buzzing honey, honey bee..."

There's no 'pissed' in beautiful! lol

Always a pleasure,
Wicahpi

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 28, 2010
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