AINT THEY SUMTHIN ?

Life goes on

 

 

 

AINT THEY SUMTHIN ?

 

She wrote him all smiles

He told her a funny

She spoke of all the miles

She had run for her hunny

 

He did`nt think she had a man

So she wrote back I aint

Then he wrote about his clan

She sez I jist caint

 

Whatcha mean I`m yurs U know

She sez yer too horny

So jist blow

He thinks he`ll try Californy

 

His life is done

So he ups and sells his farm

Then she writes hi Hun

Then he bot a gun

 

He was shoot`n mad you see

But next thing yu know

The preacher sez

Do you take this woman fur yur wife

And they all lived happ-a-leeee

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[rachelintheOC]

I luv yer poems (haha). lots of images, obviously using your past yet still painting a pic of love. Fun!

[Nicole]

Haha, I love this.
At first i was like. O.o whaaa?
But then I realized it was written in an accent, (silly me)
Hah, this made my day.. xDD

[Simone]

Love the accent ^_^ This poems great, I love the lighthearted feel it seems to have. Great job! I love it.

[Ellen Hammond]

This is cute. The accent really adds to it. Thanks for the laugh.

[Tracie Skarbo]

Great job on this one...I like the way you have put the slang into the piece...gives it so much character!!

[Stacey Watts]

This one made me giggle a bit. It was nicely done with that humorous touch. Well written.