AINT THEY SUMTHIN ?

Life goes on

 

 

 

AINT THEY SUMTHIN ?

 

She wrote him all smiles

He told her a funny

She spoke of all the miles

She had run for her hunny

 

He did`nt think she had a man

So she wrote back I aint

Then he wrote about his clan

She sez I jist caint

 

Whatcha mean I`m yurs U know

She sez yer too horny

So jist blow

He thinks he`ll try Californy

 

His life is done

So he ups and sells his farm

Then she writes hi Hun

Then he bot a gun

 

He was shoot`n mad you see

But next thing yu know

The preacher sez

Do you take this woman fur yur wife

And they all lived happ-a-leeee

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[AngelEyes15]

wow i like this poem i ryhmes and tell a story. :) Also it relates to real life and feel emotion why u read it :)

[emmajoy]

Sometimes I think you hide behind your writing .. you have this off pat .. i thi-i-nk, Brit that I am .. could actually hear the words .. great poem, funny, but with a touch of pathos half way.

[AbsentElements]

I love how you wrote it with the sort of "hick" thing going on. The lines flow together very well, each one adding onto the story. All in All a very interesting read

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Wonderful voice in this one..I liked it

[Shellie]

I really smiled at the speech, id love to know what it sounds like ive only heard it in films. Is it like the beverly hillbillies? Nice little ditty its cool!

[Katie]

This is really cute! A lot of people where I live speak like this, it made me smile. Great job!

[topsyturvy]

Hahaha it's a very cute poem. I was a bit down today but after reading it, made me smile. Please do write more!:)

[Ellen Tylor]

Well this made me laugh out loud! Very refreshing. Didn't have to think too hard or get a dictionary out! Keep writing, Eagle!

-ET

[Liza]

I am in love with your sense of humor xoxo

[linley{luu}]

Your writing really makes me smile. Your poems have a certain style about them, and this is another perfect representation. The accent makes it shine. I loved it.
Thank you for your beautiful reveiw.
Linley