THE LAST VERSE

The future

 

THE LAST VERSE

 

They looked deep into each others eyes

Their hearts pledged as one

No longer any doubt

They clung together

Forever !

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[LittleMadGirl]

A happy ed!
How nice ... and how hard to find these days ... I wish there were more of this kind here ... but everyone has to die or cry or finally break up ... Nobody understands the real meaning of love .. the ENDLESS love...
honestly .. I'm crying because of a lack of happy ends in today's poetry =)
Kudos

[Laura Nikkinen]

The last verse of love, achieving togetherness, the verse that holds the most to it and yet the one that does not hold the most importance at times. I dig this, and no, I didn't choose the shortest one, this is the first I clicked on, but I'm glad I did ;), nah jk. It's a real skill to embody something profound in such a short form. Something that people write books about, and keep writing more and more books about.

But that's real skill right there people you're looking at.

[Coyote Poetry]

These are the good verses in a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[J.Black]

Last verses are always my favourite. This shows why. Well said.

[Nicole]

I agree with everyone.
Short, simple, powerful with the added bonus of a Happy Ending! :D
I really like this one.
Props to you for writing this. :)

[Kala]

Short, simple, powerful. Great job :)

[cest la vie]

*Sigh*

No words are really needed after reading this.
Stunningly Beautiful

In your fashion: 100%

Love this,
Lynne

[Stacey Watts]

This is perfectly written and almost like every romance novel I have read. Very beautiful. Excellent work.

[Michael X]

brilliant job my friend, its a capture of the portrait, in hue. intelling the classical word design.
the title speaks volumes.

[Liza]

darling....