ALL THEY WANT

 

 

ALL THEY WANT

 

He loves her and she loves he

They do the dance of love

They putter and fume and

Finally   they just wannabe

 

She`s divine , an angel

He`s a cowboy with a beard

They can`t seem to get it on

She`s fallen for a nerd

 

This has been goin on for long

History is full of this

She`s ho-hum  and

He`s a duh !

It`s a match !!!!

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Krista Harris]

I just love this! Being neither a ho-hum or a duh, the humor is not lost on me. When one stands out as outside of the norm or unapologetically strange or even just intelligent as we artistic souls tend to do, a "match" is so much harder to find. Still, it's so much fun to chuckle at the ridiculous nuance of it all.

[Phibby Venable]

i like this poem when i read it before, and still like it here. it is the mystery of love,
so hard to put your finger on exactly what a match is. very fine.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

lol, it seems our muses are running in the same hamster race. I know exactly what you mean by this. No better material than the confusion between the sexes. Great.

[Tracie Skarbo]

A cute short write that cheered me up...thanks

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

lol i needed a chuckle, my friend.. and i'm so glad to read your work again.

and yes there is something to be said for 'birds of a feather" hm?

[Magdelena]

Oh this was sweet!!! I loved the way you brought forth how opposites do attract no matter what! Nicely done...

Stumble, rumble, beer, champane. If love is going to bite ya, it's all the same..


Mag xx