KEY TO THE GOLDEN DOOR

always searching for his magic love

 

KEY TO THE GOLDEN DOOR

 

From time to time you will see

This solitary traveler passing through

He always seems to be carrying a torch

For  a  love he prays to be

 

Please, no  pity

For this lonely single man

This is the way he is

Flattery, fun and deadpan

 

She  is every man`s dream you see

And the traveler must score

Not with a pretty maid

But, with the key to the golden door

 

The key is in her character

She is gifted and so much more

No one in the entire world can compare

With the Key to the Golden Door

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Softly whispered words .. written for the world to read. A poem to touch the heart of any red-blooded women .. well, most of them, for sure.

Re-reading, there's a touch of whimsy and flickering smiles in this too. And that touch of golden magic.

[Norma M Sutton]

Interesting poem. Loses me a bit, but that's probably just me.

[Wicahpi]

a journey evolved through word...
intriguing and well composed.
Well done!

[cest la vie]

What a gift to come home from work to.
It is lyrical, beautiful, honest and just down right wonderful.
Women would be honored to have such words written on thier behalf.
Just a rare gem among poems..

[nostal]

Wow,
Of course this is well written but there's something else intrigueing about it.
Don't really know.

[Tracie Skarbo]

Amazing....I have no idea how this one got my me a month ago...but it is utterly amazing. I hope you find your key and then some! :)

[IMOGEAN]

Before you taught me, dear friend, I had no idea what character was. I was lost in many ways that I had no idea of. This is a splendid piece, crafted by a man who knows the world, knows the value of a decent woman. Whimsical in sound � all the while brilliant in form and meaning -- I expected no less from you, John.

[Lightfalls]

This is a fun read. Really nice, I liked it, and that feeling throughout it that there is "something" more to be obtained, rather then what may seem obvious.

[Manie]

Wow! Very well written. Dreamy, fluent, story-like and more. I love this poem.