SNUGGLES

she climbs in his lap and is comforted

 

SNUGGLES

   

 

Snuggles are for babes and grandmas

And the Cutie that hears our groans

She crawls up in your lap

Sleepy, warm and soft

With a gentle sigh

Clings to you

Possessively

Yours

 

You breathe deep the scent of her and flowers

And fresh washed hair and stuff

And babies and bangels and

Bumpers and  bliss

Thanking God

She clings

To you

Like

This

 

You will not move from here to there at all

How could man be such a cad and spoil

This perfect rendezvous with loving

Sweet dedication which only asks

She be comforted and protected

By your loving chest and arms

Slowly hearts that beat as one

Make his day complete

He pulls a blanket

To warm her

In her

Sleep

 

----Eagle Cruagh

 

Author's Note

After reading how to treat a woman,
this is what I thought appropriate....

Reviews

[Amanda Avalon]

I hope I am not wrong in my assumption, but I see a vision in this poem as the protective role of a father... a very soft and gentle piece.

I don't know what it's like to have children, yet I hope to some day... this best describes to me the comfort and joy one must feel when one holds their own in thier arms.

What a soothing read... Very nicely done!

[Tracie Skarbo]

My god you have the gift of imagery....I think this is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. You have brought a tear to eye with this one, it hits every nerve and every heart string.

Tigra

[Ophelia]

I like this a lot. It's so sweet! I think this is very well written. Wonderful job!