SNUGGLES

she climbs in his lap and is comforted

 

SNUGGLES

   

 

Snuggles are for babes and grandmas

And the Cutie that hears our groans

She crawls up in your lap

Sleepy, warm and soft

With a gentle sigh

Clings to you

Possessively

Yours

 

You breathe deep the scent of her and flowers

And fresh washed hair and stuff

And babies and bangels and

Bumpers and  bliss

Thanking God

She clings

To you

Like

This

 

You will not move from here to there at all

How could man be such a cad and spoil

This perfect rendezvous with loving

Sweet dedication which only asks

She be comforted and protected

By your loving chest and arms

Slowly hearts that beat as one

Make his day complete

He pulls a blanket

To warm her

In her

Sleep

 

----Eagle Cruagh

 

Author's Note

After reading how to treat a woman,
this is what I thought appropriate....

Reviews

[Amanda Avalon]

I hope I am not wrong in my assumption, but I see a vision in this poem as the protective role of a father... a very soft and gentle piece.

I don't know what it's like to have children, yet I hope to some day... this best describes to me the comfort and joy one must feel when one holds their own in thier arms.

What a soothing read... Very nicely done!

[~LeeAnn~]

Splendid use of imagrey in the poem.

[QuietPoet]

This was sooo sweet and beautiful. Nicely done. I enjoyed this.

[Emily B]

I can't imagine that I would change a thing about this write. It flows so nicely. As comforting as the lovely lap and the arms that wrap around. :)

[cest la vie]

What an endearing and comfortable write. The story from start to finish is just littered with love. Great write!!

[x]

This had to be about a pet surely.

[VintageHottie]

Out of every poem you have written, this is my favorite.
It's sweet and gentle. Made me feel like the way every girl wants to feel. protected and comfortable.
I loved the characters.
Not sure if it's an adult and child relationship, but that is the interpretation I got out of it.
Bravo my friend!!!!

[Lauren Marie]

Aww, this was such a lovely poem!
The only thing that irked me was the line: "And fresh washed hair and stuff." I didn't like the "and stuff," part of it. Though changing it would clash with the rhyming, I think something along the lines of "soap" or "love" (love would probably rhyme better) would make this line better. Also, I think the correct grammar would be "freshly."
Of course that is just me.
This was a great write!
~Lauren

[dusk1107]

I love this!!! You are such a talented writer! This is truly beautiful!!

[wolfshrew]

this is nice in every single way. i like the variety in your writing.