SNUGGLES

she climbs in his lap and is comforted

 

SNUGGLES

   

 

Snuggles are for babes and grandmas

And the Cutie that hears our groans

She crawls up in your lap

Sleepy, warm and soft

With a gentle sigh

Clings to you

Possessively

Yours

 

You breathe deep the scent of her and flowers

And fresh washed hair and stuff

And babies and bangels and

Bumpers and  bliss

Thanking God

She clings

To you

Like

This

 

You will not move from here to there at all

How could man be such a cad and spoil

This perfect rendezvous with loving

Sweet dedication which only asks

She be comforted and protected

By your loving chest and arms

Slowly hearts that beat as one

Make his day complete

He pulls a blanket

To warm her

In her

Sleep

 

----Eagle Cruagh

 

Author's Note

After reading how to treat a woman,
this is what I thought appropriate....

Reviews

[Amanda Avalon]

I hope I am not wrong in my assumption, but I see a vision in this poem as the protective role of a father... a very soft and gentle piece.

I don't know what it's like to have children, yet I hope to some day... this best describes to me the comfort and joy one must feel when one holds their own in thier arms.

What a soothing read... Very nicely done!

[Norma M Sutton]

Short and to the point.

[Kimi H]

this is how a woman should be treated in some respects...not being hurt or feeling low like i felt when i was with that a*s hole...the feeling of security and hope...but not only women deserve this...every body deserves it..no matter who or what they are..

[topsyturvy]

Wow, completely different from your dark poems. I loved this, very refreshing and well-put! Though I have to admit something.. It reminded me of... 2 things. One, was a very cared-for puppy, and the other was a baby.

But then again, thinking from a wholly different point of view, it can be seen also as a form of love-making.

[Manyfacets]

What a lovely piece. The presentation is unique. The poem clearly expresses love for a special someone. Wonderful work!....Smiles to you.

[Tina]

So sweet.

[Krista Harris]

I concur with everything they said. This is very sweet! And great imagery, form, and well all the rest. Hmm...if only they had award shows for poets....

[Sheila Kline]

And most appropriate it is.......
comforting, gentle, beautiful and as tender as an armfull of whisper soft cuddles!
Oh to be regarded as such would be sheer joy!

[Ellen Hammond]

Awww this is so sweet and cuddly. There are times a woman needs just such a reassurance of being loved and cherished, feeling safe and comfortable in her man's arms. And feeling that safe she just might want to express her love in ways she may not have dared before. I love this snuggly poem!

[LittleMadGirl]

I don't see the FATHER here, I guess it's more the boyfriend/husband protacting this girl like a father. And it would be the right wqay, to treat me, for I need someone dominant like most of the girls today
but I know a lot of girls who are real dominant in a relationshir and would hate to have someone acting like a father as their boyfriend =)