WHAT IS LOVING

this is what love is all about

 

What is Loving ?

     

Everybody knows about love

but, what is loving ?

 

What is it when she writes you a note

Just to make you feel swell

That is called loving

 

When he writes you a poem

Just because you are swell

That is loving

 

When you say I love you

And you don't care who knows

You have just loved him

 

There are times when you are low

And he will just hold you then

Yes, that is loving

 

Many things you can`t tell him

He says I understand

Did you think he is loving

Yes that`s loving

 

He waits and waits for you

What for ?

Because he is loving

 

You are crabby and blunt

Sometimes things are just wrong

He smiles at you and kisses your nose

And that`s loving

 

I did`nt have to at all

So I wrote her this

That`s loving

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

 

Reviews

[Kaela]

I'm currently listening to Thousand Years by Christina Perri. It made a perfect complement. I like this. It is a prefect picture of what love should be. It's not the words of telling someone you love them bu the minor acts of love that someone commits every day for their beloved.

[Anastasia]

Simply beautiful.

[Sorry Infamous]

This was simple,
sweet.
Each verse was warmth in my heart.
What an endearing little poem you have created.

"He waits and waits for you
What for ?
Because he is loving"

just lovely.

[Tracie Skarbo]

I love the images you have put forth in this loving poem. What a wonderful walk down the path of forgiveness this portrays. Thank god some of us know how to forgive the small things and make them okay again with kisses on the nose.

Tigra

[Anya]

I have a small lump in my throat. Wonderfully sweet.