WHAT IS LOVING

this is what love is all about

 

What is Loving ?

     

Everybody knows about love

but, what is loving ?

 

What is it when she writes you a note

Just to make you feel swell

That is called loving

 

When he writes you a poem

Just because you are swell

That is loving

 

When you say I love you

And you don't care who knows

You have just loved him

 

There are times when you are low

And he will just hold you then

Yes, that is loving

 

Many things you can`t tell him

He says I understand

Did you think he is loving

Yes that`s loving

 

He waits and waits for you

What for ?

Because he is loving

 

You are crabby and blunt

Sometimes things are just wrong

He smiles at you and kisses your nose

And that`s loving

 

I did`nt have to at all

So I wrote her this

That`s loving

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

 

Reviews

[Kaela]

I'm currently listening to Thousand Years by Christina Perri. It made a perfect complement. I like this. It is a prefect picture of what love should be. It's not the words of telling someone you love them bu the minor acts of love that someone commits every day for their beloved.

[Poetic Beauty]

Loving is two souls magnetized toward each other.

[Jola]

...love to watch over someone else's solitude ... good job ...
Greetings:)
Jola

[SM Davis]

Sweet! I love the little kisses in the nose. That's affection...and loving.

[linley{luu}]

I had to read this again.

I'm sorry..

Linley

[Taylor H.]

I dont know why it cut it off, but it was great because its true

[Taylor H.]

sweet poem

[Lauren Beth]

Very sweet and "loving" poem. I really enjoyed it, with words you capture some great little moments, pictures that the reader can see and feel. Wonderful piece!

[x]

A very sweet write written with someone very special in mind.
It comes across as gentle and giving and it is as if the writer is looking at this wonderful woman going about her day and he just gets inspired to put this down.
I like the distinction between love and loving for there is a difference.
Love is something you say, but loving is something you do.
This poem is a sweet, living love token.

[linley{luu}]

John

This is a really beautiful poem.

Really.

Simply perfect.

Yours

Corn Syrup Girl