A SINGLE TEAR

A single tear for a lost soul

A QUIET TEAR

 

A solitary room with

Only an empty chair

No one will ever know

A tear drops in the air

Reviews

[Kelly D. Burris]

This may be off the wall but when I read this it brought to mind the criminals on deathrow. The time when they come before "the chair" one final time, before they loose their life. I thought of how God grieves and cries for those who still don't know him in their last moments.

No one will ever know
A tear drops in the air

The tears of God, we don't see with our eyes.

Great write.
Kelly

[emmajoy]

Beautiful, sad. Few words, much said.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautiful write in so few words. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[lowena]

Short and O so sweet

[IMOGEAN]

I see a man alone, weeping. This great sorrow is stifled, only to be let forth in moments of solitude. Secret pain is possibly the worst kind, because you live it alone.

A very poignant piece, written in so few words. Brilliance.

[Constance]

Simple, yet poignant just the same. Thank you.

[Angelic Darkness]

Beautiful flow of such pure elements.