FRIENDS

FRIENDS

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh
"

Just let me be a friend to man

"
FRIENDS
 
Let us examine the condition
Of which you speak
Perhaps there is something
I can do while at my peak
 
Like maybe be a friend to you
What can I do
For that is what a friend is like
It is just to be true blue
 
And what is true blue you ask
It`s to undertake any task
Just so you don`t need to
And I`ll be off my back
 
Now the question still needs
An answer  since civilization
Hangs while my heart bleeds
So, here goes a dramatization
 
Friends, fellows, countrymen
Do you remember that man who died
That we might live
He was my friend, he never lied
 
Do you remember all those men who died
That we might be free
They never thought of `selves
They only lived for you and me
 
Do you remember all those folks from 9-11
Were they thinking of themselves ?
I think they worried for the ones they loved
And perhaps a little for the One Above
 
Now we`re getting somewhere with this
If friends died for us who knew us not
Can we call our fellow man our friend
Even though his life has never been our lot ?
 
You bet we can, you, every woman and man
Must be my friend and you certainly can
Do you remember the wholesome soul
Who lived by the side of the road ?
 
I will build my house by the side of the road
and be a friend to man.  Remember ?
Nothing said about who is going to be my friend
Just know me as the one you will turn to
In the end----the end.
----  Eagle Cruagh

© 2008 Eagle Cruagh


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This is a strong piece that articulates what the genuineness of friendship to our fellow man symbolizes! The word friend seems to be taken lightly, as do the people that give their lives so that we might live ours!
"Now the question still needs An answer
since civilization Hangs while my heart bleeds
So, here goes a dramatization"
One of my favorite stanza's; as you narrated this so well, but the whole piece was excellent ~ Jude :-)


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I truely enjoyed this piece of yours!
Wonderful and beautiful piece
I am greatful that you wanted me to read it.
I also agree with everything you said in "Friends"
Can you say AMAZING!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely done. A great message through out. My favorite part:

Friends, fellows, countrymen
Do you remember that man who died
That we might live
He was my friend, he never lied

Do you remember all those men who died
That we might be free
They never thought of `selves
They only lived for you and me

Do you remember all those folks from 9-11
Were they thinking of themselves ?
I think they worried for the ones they loved
And perhaps a little for the One Above

Thought provoking write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great thoughts and feelings expressed in this. Wonderfully written, nicely done.


Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I greatly enjoyed this piece. And I truly agree with you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfull! I totaly agree with your thoughts and feelings!
We are all In the same friendship fish bowl.
Great Write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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