HAS ANYBODY SEEN MY GIRL ?

Lovers problem

HAS ANYBODY SEEN MY GIRL ?

She was here a little while ago
What mysterious force suppose
Brings couples to the brink
Disaster rides the crest and lo
They never stay the course

Some say they have met another
Tell me is that true
What other replaces love and
Leaves man feeling blue

Awwww ! you have heard this old
Lament, how sad for you and I
To always seek someone to blame
When the well had just run dry

If I could only stem her tears
And maybe slow the hurt
Provide the thing that I don`t have
Only then I will not be dirt

Mother nature perhaps
Adjusts each loving couple
To make the future and their pride
Fit her soul, the future bride

The storm consuming her
Is not a hurricane, it`s only wind
As she will see as she nears the end
Of anguish and thoughts profane

Clouds will float on by
Her sweet cheeks will dry
The sun again will light her life
`Though mine shall wither and die
-------Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Tracie Skarbo]

Such a sad lament...not all couples end this way. I hope and dream this is so for if it is not I think I will be drying my cheeks for weeks to come. I hope sunshine comes into your life to sweeten such sorrow.

Tigra

[IMOGEAN]

Such a sad sad poem. It makes me want to cry. :-(

[SweetPeachesAlways]

To always seek someone to blame
When the well had just run dry

How true...utterly poignant, sad, thought-provoking...makes the reader taste and feel the sorrow...

Good write.