FOILED FOR FACETIOUSNESS

FOILED FOR FACETIOUSNESS

 

Fragrant Freda felt funny

Feeling Fred`s fascination

For flora and fragrance

Freda feloniously flirted

 

Fred, frothy in his filigree

Foiled Freda`s flippant`s

Forever

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Betty]

CREATIVE INDEED!!!! Such a light, Fun, and a clever poem.. Really am glad to have read it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Whenever i find writings like such, i just keep on reading them until my mouth hurts and i start making weird pronunciations lol. This was witty, just the perfect mixture of lighrness and creativity. Great work:-):-):-D.

[LaVonneTheLovely]

this makes me smile --> :)

[John]

Witty alliterative verse that left me wanting more. How about G and H?

[SyberRose]

This gave me a little chuckle haa...very creative Eagle.:)