THE LATITUDE OF HOME

THE LATITUDE OF HOME

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

LATITUDE  39.2075 N.
LONGITUDE 121.2975 W
 
Bow riding the wave
Higher and higher
Ship fighting the storm
Battling for life to save
 
Pointing to the black sky
Lightening flashes round
Back toward the mountain
Fighting to get home
 
----- Eagle Cruagh

© 2013 Eagle Cruagh


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You have a fascinatination for the seas don't you? And let me say this
, I am really amazed at how you describe the wilderness of the turbulent stormy ones, it just gives a beautiful imagery of the whole scenario. Loved it, short but hits the bull's eye:-):-):-D.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sorry to make you miss,
39/121 is the latitude and longitude of
Smartsville, California.
O appreciate the read----thank you,
----= Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm going to take a guess, but is the L/L area around China/Korea?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you know what fella....i'd seen one movie last week, you memorized the view of that again by your this piece....it's really very nice one fella.......you did here great job, i think LATITUDE and LONGITUDE has worked here, i really made a view of your this beautiful piece........it's sound you know like a "TITANIC" ...not sure, but i think so....

well penned, great write :)
have this 93/100 :)

take care......!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sounds like a scary and turbulent trip...nicely penned...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Does smartsville really have such clear blue, naturally beautiful waterways...I had my eyes closed when I drove through...sorry I was tired
thank you for the food for thought-without you my mind would be blank*)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this one

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Eagle Cruagh
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