THE TRUTH IS IN THERE SOMEWHERE

 

  THE TRUTH IS IN THERE SOMEWHERE

 

Met her on the street , we talked

about old times.

 

I had to go --- "Here she said, take

my car".  I did. 

 

Driving off in to the hills, got hungry,

stopped at sandwich shop , paid and

started to leave.

 

Damn, I did`nt want to see old friends.

Just wanted to get out of there, things

to do.   But, there was Ivan walking

toward me.  We sat down again and had

the best conversation--- caught up on

old times, slapped each other on the

back and left--- "Stay in touch".

 

Out the corner of my eye, Ivan checking

out my (friends) car,  

I have known that guy for years, he never

missed a detail in his life.

 

I`m think`n, "before Ole Ivan is a mile down

the road he will have checked the reg., on

that car."  He knows Sally, he will wonder

why I am driving Sally`s car--- and Ole Ivan

will find out..... always does.

 

Then I remember.  Ivan died in 1991.

 

Sure hope Sally got that car back because

I woke up and have not seen Sally for 20

years.

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Oh! What a pertrifying dream! But I enjoy such ones...especially when they leave that lasting lingering feeling of having been with them ...touched them. Loved this! 100/100

[jdr / Jennifer]

Very interesting read- the ending, although sad- quite intense & mysterious, made me love this piece all the more.

[Marie]

There's always some convulated truth to these dreams...you're trying to tell yourself something....

[Corset]

dreaming about old friends again? Had an affair with old Sally did ya? You see dead people? ah, the list is endless :) A very entertain tale Mr. Cruagh, I enjoyed ;)

[Meliss@k]

Mysterious and morbid at the same time. Very interesting.