GO`N FER THE PURTY

 

 

Go`n Fer The Purty

 

She`s a gonner

Jist split

Talked real pritty to her

But she split

 

I aint talk`n bout how she`s bilt

But what she done

Leav`n me alone like that

Aint no pun

 

I`ll miss her sure nuff

She`s pritty as my old horse

The ole horse jist died

But this one got tired

 

She missed the xcitement I spose

I almost had her by the nose

But she did`nt go for hands on

She was more into pritty prose

 

Now she`s gone and it`s all right

What you do`n tonight

Won`t ya help me with my grief

Think you can light my light

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

interesting perspective ...wondering why she left but what was she here for in the first place
lighting your light again quickly heals but only with a touch of care leaving the wound to fester into our everyday emotions...
thank you for provoking thought

[NaugleB]

I love this, I really do! This just makes me think of a good old chevy truck, bond fires, drinking beer-you sent me down memory lane here :)....I love the slang the flow of this. Great job.