NOSTALGIA

NOSTALGIA

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

Looking inward and behind.

NOSTALGIA

I tried to write a poem
Because my love she asked me too
She said , "my love, please write for me"
"You say such pretty things
And when we pass from this sweet life
Your thoughts nostalgia brings"

Suddenly her fragrance fills me
Like she is in the room
I close my eyes and flowers bloom
Like photo`s in the air
My sweet fair love reclining now
Like nostalgia , but she is there

Shaking cobwebs from my brain
The mist of coming rain
Morning dew from a lowly branch
Fluttering wings of dove
You live in these and other things
My angel from above

How to make you understand
That life without you would end
You are my sweet eternal love
Our tenderness in all travail
With the certainty of a river`s bend
You rise before me frail

I hope you understand my Sweet
Mere words cannot replace
The warmth we hold so dear
The veils of heaven and the corridors
Of hell will never make this clear
I`m you`re canvas and you`re my lace

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Eagle, this was romance pure and beautiful! Painted a gergous picture with your words!

[Emberlorna]

This is what love should be. I truly felt the emotion in this piece. Just lovely :}

[Renée]

Beautiful piece your wrote .. So tender & sweet

[cloud]

This is truly a heart-felt piece that leaves one with a sigh. You speak of an unbreakable bond that is to be cherished and admired. Fantastic writing.

[CreativeCookie]

Aww.. so sweet! It's got a really great flow as well.
Love,
CreativeCookie

[LA Lorena]

Very nice work. Intricate rhyme scheme, beautiful words and lovely sentiments expressed. What more could one ask for?

[SparrowSong]

A stunning spill from the heart, and those last lines, what a gorgeous way to end this. A sigh worthy write, thank you for sharing this.

[David Scott]

Your lady love should be well satisfied with this nostagic reflection of her. A soft and tender look into a heart filled with love. Enjoyed your poem.

[Kaela]

*stands and claps enthusiastically* I am SO pleased with this!!!!

[ms. barrie]

this is gorgeous.


Shaking cobwebs from my brain
The mist of coming rain
Morning dew from a lowly branch
Fluttering wings of dove
You live in these and other things
My angel from above

such poetic eloquence conveyed here. simply amazing. thanks for sharing :)