MY OLD GIBSON HONEY

 

My Old Gibson Honey

 

She`s just an old Gibson

With a crooked bridge

And when I hit her

She whines

 

She`s kinda beat up and old

But she`s mine

When I feel her round bottom

And rub her strings she shines

 

This sweet little thing is so mellow

She loves my corny songs

And when we are together

We just belong

 

This scratchy old Gibson

Makes  everybody swoon

She makes that love`n music

When I finger her beneath the moon

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Jon Roggie]

For me it is still an old Guild. Hollow body electric. This brings back some memories.
Nice.

[Valentine]

My sister-in-law had a Gibson too..She sang on the oprey and traveled the world with Mel Tillis..long ago..she is gone now and much too young..guiters are great in the right hands aren't they? Kathie

[Kat Wildd]

I really like this one & can definitely relate

[Corset]

This reminds me of something someone said once about the similarities about a guitar and a woman, I won't try to repeat it , it just wouldn't have the same meaning coming out of my mouth, but this expresses very well the relationship between a guitarist and his instrument of pleasure.

[Anjelica Allen]

I really identify with this because I am a musician. I have a relationship like this with both my guitar and my oboe. The relationship between a musician and their instrument is a precious, sacred one and I love your way of expressing it.

[ms. barrie]

beautiful poem, the last two sentences are my favorite, hint of erotica yet it really isn't since that's what happens when you play (even try to in my case) the guitar, sliding your fingers across their strings. i love how descriptive this write is, the rhyming and flow. this is an amazing write. thanks for sharing. adds to favorites.

[Dominique]

I love this poem about your faviorite guitar that you have. I love it.

[Lovely Lady]

Ahhh, to make love to your guitar can be the best... and she is always waiting to give you more and receive all you have. Well done and the last line... is my favorite.
~lovely♥

[Katchzen]

I wish I had the patience for a relationship like this.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, the old ones are always the best!! I am sure her sound is indeed beautiful, and mesmerizes those who are blessed to hear such sweet sounds!
A good one can even make a corny song sound better! Nice write my friend!