MY OLD GIBSON HONEY

 

My Old Gibson Honey

 

She`s just an old Gibson

With a crooked bridge

And when I hit her

She whines

 

She`s kinda beat up and old

But she`s mine

When I feel her round bottom

And rub her strings she shines

 

This sweet little thing is so mellow

She loves my corny songs

And when we are together

We just belong

 

This scratchy old Gibson

Makes  everybody swoon

She makes that love`n music

When I finger her beneath the moon

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Mmm, guess it's not the Les Paul since this guitar is definitely a female.
Pretty sweet music under the moon... Does it get any better?

[Eagle Cruagh]

Yes, but you could swoon, even pass out in rhapsody.
Sure, but it must be your desire.

[Matching Socks]

Swoon maybe, pass out never.
Degree of desire depends on degree of talent...

[Eagle Cruagh]

I sure turned Pandora loose this time.
That`s ok, you are still nice.

[Matching Socks]

And you're still talented.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Awwwww ! ;)

[Sioranth Smith]

I've just started learning to play the guitar recently, so I loved reading this both on a personal level and for the imagery it has. It made me smile. :)

[Frieda P]

Sensual undertones, nice. My ex had an old Gibson, he played me better than her...just saying. Good one.

[SparrowSong]

There is something so feminine in the shape of stringed instruments, I absolutely love what you have done here and those last lines bring a smile, well written.

[lee von cleef]

Ok ,now make her burp,find a spot for that bridge,and buy some depends.she is hot,careful how you spark her,those wires might bite.

[David Scott]

Too funny. I'm glad my daughter's name is not Honey Gibson or I would have to say something about those fingers "beneath the moon". Ha. I see you love music. Your writing shows a misical quality as well.
Be well.

[Kaela]

Smooth and beautiful. :D Missed your writing while I was away.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

aww so cute, I love this keep it up!!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL You make anything seem sensual!! This is a sweet uplifting piece... with a heart of gold... To love something so much (with a woman's personality, no doubt)that it becomes a part of you, is endearing. Excellent work!