What do you get from a coffee trip and Boredom

I think...I've finally cracked

Welcome to  the

Blackest tragic heart attack with a slight twist

Enough crossed t’s to make even satan righteous

Take flight

A spray of bullets over new Babylon get your Sodom on and gemmorah that whorah

Whoooooo haaaaaa

Friends, greet this love, the lyrical tweaker

Grab enough golden wings you can call me lead seeker

The Death Eater

The s**t beater

Got so many good and plentys they call me trick or treater

Entreat her

to a night of colloquial carnal lullabyes of butterflies and jizz pies

duck out in the AM before she mistakingly mistakes me for someone who mates

stay home and mast-

her-

bate

All the risk is hairy palms

And a hairy soul riddled with psalms like...

Bombs dropped off and a pop off of the milky white millennium

Impregnate pens give birth to dreams

Hold the f**k up

I’m

Losing

Sttteeaammm

Reviews

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your flow in impeccable!!! this trips off the tongue like its begging to be told..brilliant

[roarke]

Reminds me of The Red Rooster dj jives, raps or whatever they were. You were channelin' dude. You forgot the part about needin' glasses. It's world war one, and you're standin' up in the trenches, fearless, defiant, a silhouette in mustard gas. I'd give ya a medal but I've got two shots here an' one of 'em is for you. Gotta keep the steam up.

[Robin]

slam bamma boom bang ... git up

[Doreen]

The only problem with on line reviewing is you can't see me, or hear me snapping. So, close your eyes and envision me snapping my fingers while my head bobs just slightly while saying, "groovyyyyy". You've got the stuff.

[Missy Schwarz]

Amazing work.
"Entreat her, to a night of colloquial carnal lullabyes of butterflies and jizz pies"

[Dream Slave]

Very nice, this piece reminds me of a shroom dream I had once. The world needs all of this chaos... to know what peace really is.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

The flow was great, I felt like I was raping instead of reading! Great Poem

[Crowley]

This is like hanging out at the drugstore in the 70's, watchin' all the hot pants and tube tops glide by wishin I could roller skate better and watchin all the suave dudes (mainly you) pickin them up without having to roller skate cuz you have an SS with big wide wheels sittin at the curb...sometimes life just aint fair. Nice stuff, now get down and give me 20.

[anonymous]

Yes! This is great my friend. The flow and the wording is clever and cheeky. Wonderful write and a great read. No criticism, just praise.

[underwriter]

haha this is awesome! completely different to most poetry i have read on here, but i like it!
"Bombs dropped off and a pop off of the milky white millennium
Impregnate pens give birth to dreams
Hold the f**k up
I’m
Losing
Sttteeaammm"
Awesome lines!