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battleships, god and microphones...what does 10 minutes and some flow get you?

Ladies and gentlemans

please peruse your Pariah Gospel to the passage that begins the

power

of

rhyme

 

I rip the

power of rhyme while contemplating the lift of gravity

backstroking in strophe around saturn's blue green sea

 and im glad that we

had this time to emphatically emphasize the need for spacial secrecy

 

the almighty sometimes forgets his place in my f*****g galaxy

lemme splain you sumfin of lord of the big game board

i place chess pieces with more piquant positivity then a*s eaters from philly

i am the caped crusader crusing on 95 doing 95 snatching up old ladies and left over angels that lifted the throne off lucifer

you had

7 days and made some light and placed to rest

I had 7 minutes and created a piece of lyrical superiority

a bright fiberoptical octipus that infects insects like bubonics

that's right I said

infects

insects

You may have put the M-E in ME but I injected the MC in M-E and created envy in everything I see

and I grave the empty figurines playing battlehip with bullshit

B

9

you done missed the motivated shift

 and I call into the ears of an absintee lord who aint got the vacation time stashed away to hear it

i open neptune's moon and snatch shadows

diagraming the blood demensions

watch the f**k out i engulf galaxies upon inhilation

you can try again tomorrow

 

literary motivation

to the power

of

rhyme

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

I feel like gettin' on the business end of a f*****g Apache helicopter after reading that and mowin' down some civilians. Stroke after stroke that was some powerful stuff, great images and lines abound. I don't need to go to the gym tonight, I am just gonna read this a few more times and by the time I'm done I'll be ripped and have twice the amount of facial hair than I had before....cuz you da man.

[MuSe Ampoule]

hmf...this has got to be a new piece in my favorite library. I mean...seriously...slam poetry at at a top shelf level. The play on words...on spelling is fantastic. I can see you reading this in a dark seedy bar, with breaks and pauses and the whole shout match where necessary. And the topic...I laughed...yous got ballz.

Loved it! :)

[Poeticpiers]

Rhyming cannot be crime
I choose to rhyme all the time
But I find my words flow sweeter
If i concentrate on meter
To balance up the words I rhyme
Not using meter is a crime
Unmetered rhyme's a waste of time.
Is not poetry its prose.
You wont agree I must suppose
I do not care I've said my say
continue writing your own way.