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battleships, god and microphones...what does 10 minutes and some flow get you?

Ladies and gentlemans

please peruse your Pariah Gospel to the passage that begins the

power

of

rhyme

 

I rip the

power of rhyme while contemplating the lift of gravity

backstroking in strophe around saturn's blue green sea

 and im glad that we

had this time to emphatically emphasize the need for spacial secrecy

 

the almighty sometimes forgets his place in my f*****g galaxy

lemme splain you sumfin of lord of the big game board

i place chess pieces with more piquant positivity then a*s eaters from philly

i am the caped crusader crusing on 95 doing 95 snatching up old ladies and left over angels that lifted the throne off lucifer

you had

7 days and made some light and placed to rest

I had 7 minutes and created a piece of lyrical superiority

a bright fiberoptical octipus that infects insects like bubonics

that's right I said

infects

insects

You may have put the M-E in ME but I injected the MC in M-E and created envy in everything I see

and I grave the empty figurines playing battlehip with bullshit

B

9

you done missed the motivated shift

 and I call into the ears of an absintee lord who aint got the vacation time stashed away to hear it

i open neptune's moon and snatch shadows

diagraming the blood demensions

watch the f**k out i engulf galaxies upon inhilation

you can try again tomorrow

 

literary motivation

to the power

of

rhyme

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

I feel like gettin' on the business end of a f*****g Apache helicopter after reading that and mowin' down some civilians. Stroke after stroke that was some powerful stuff, great images and lines abound. I don't need to go to the gym tonight, I am just gonna read this a few more times and by the time I'm done I'll be ripped and have twice the amount of facial hair than I had before....cuz you da man.

[Doreen]

Okay, you talked me into it....I'll drink the cool aid. Your words are mystical and mesmerizing. Good show, old chap! Check mate.

[Ruth]

Holy cow LMAO Now, I shall begin now I have come down lol Brilliant love, your direction of wording here is phenomenal! I have to say, this is one of the best things I have read in a long time :)

The power of ryhme is taken to a new level here, you take it, crush it and paint with the hue eminating from it, you obliterate it and rebuild it in your own manner and you feellllll it!!!

The lord thrown in here is used in an intelligent manner and ohhh, wouldn't it be good if he wasn't always on that vacation, hmm, even though not religious, you may me think lol

Job well done, I would say....power at its best!
Outstanding!

xx

[sayandeep kundu]

Mind f*****g awesome quirky piece of poetry.. wooff..

[An Ordinary Woman]

like a bullet slicing through poetry...it has the meter, the meaning, it's hot hot hot.

Very cool, bold writing!

[luciddreamer]

Whoa man...I just wrote a poem about roller coaster and now have actually rode one...this blew my effing mind....

Peace
Robin

[Robin]

some can't walk trough the woods without tripping , and then you find the ones who can run ..

[robyn.alexandra]

Ridiculously good. Insightful, fun, fast paced. Rhyming at it's best.
True brilliance.

[Kerry O'Connor]

This poem kicks butt!

What a headlong dive into a maelstrom of syllables, rhymes, signs and the divine.

I'm going to climb to the top of the diving board and do it all again.

[OT]

hahaha very powerful E.H!! another great write and brilliant read, such an effortless way with words, I agree with MuSe it has quite an urban poet cafe like feel to it haha (Which is a compliment) - also has quite a rap feel to it, it's empowered for sure!! and I quite like the sporadic rhythm! sometimes I feel messages can be dissolved in rhyme, very nice!!!