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battleships, god and microphones...what does 10 minutes and some flow get you?

Ladies and gentlemans

please peruse your Pariah Gospel to the passage that begins the

power

of

rhyme

 

I rip the

power of rhyme while contemplating the lift of gravity

backstroking in strophe around saturn's blue green sea

 and im glad that we

had this time to emphatically emphasize the need for spacial secrecy

 

the almighty sometimes forgets his place in my f*****g galaxy

lemme splain you sumfin of lord of the big game board

i place chess pieces with more piquant positivity then a*s eaters from philly

i am the caped crusader crusing on 95 doing 95 snatching up old ladies and left over angels that lifted the throne off lucifer

you had

7 days and made some light and placed to rest

I had 7 minutes and created a piece of lyrical superiority

a bright fiberoptical octipus that infects insects like bubonics

that's right I said

infects

insects

You may have put the M-E in ME but I injected the MC in M-E and created envy in everything I see

and I grave the empty figurines playing battlehip with bullshit

B

9

you done missed the motivated shift

 and I call into the ears of an absintee lord who aint got the vacation time stashed away to hear it

i open neptune's moon and snatch shadows

diagraming the blood demensions

watch the f**k out i engulf galaxies upon inhilation

you can try again tomorrow

 

literary motivation

to the power

of

rhyme

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

I feel like gettin' on the business end of a f*****g Apache helicopter after reading that and mowin' down some civilians. Stroke after stroke that was some powerful stuff, great images and lines abound. I don't need to go to the gym tonight, I am just gonna read this a few more times and by the time I'm done I'll be ripped and have twice the amount of facial hair than I had before....cuz you da man.

[A Risen Heroine.]

Amazing job.
I can't wait to read more of your work!
Keep up the amazing job and thanks for sharing!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[theunionisloud]

This is so impossibly clever! You injected so much personality into the piece that I literally could not stop laughing the whole damn time. I don't even know what else to say. For me, arrogance is the least attractive quality, ever. But you made it more than acceptable in this poem... desirable even. If you knew my aversion to arrogance, you would understand that definitely means something! Granted, for this piece, you likely adopted a certain character and exaggerated the s**t out of it.. but still. Still. Sheer transcendence right here.

[Poetic Beauty]

I not quite sure what to say about this rant. I think I am too tired to get the meaning of this piece. I like some of the lines in this poem. You still have your metaphoric genius going on here, but I'm not getting a complete picture. I will reread this when I am not sleep deprived and babysitting.

[Elizebeth Brooks]

Great work. I loved the way you worded that, and put it together. I can not wait to read more of your work. :-)

R.

[Erica Daubert]

This is amazing. I absolutely love it (even though you knocked Philly real quck - I"m a Philly girl). Yet, there's such raw passion and emotion in this. Can't wait to read more.

[kuru]

"the almighty sometimes forgets his place in my f*****g galaxy"...praise the lord my good man you made blasphemy religious..lol that was pure adrenaline rush!

[Esoteric Strand]

This is real fun to read, and there's so much going on, it's worth a second or third run through. I can't help but be reminded of MF DOOM in certain parts. I mean that as a compliment.

Somehow you manage to create something that is at once unique and seemingly well-researched, but has the feel as if you made it in one draught. Well done

[A.A.Romanczuk]

You are a word-smith genius...this one kind of left me speechless..

[Nobody.]

brilliant s**t.

[Michael of Gilead]

And when you got down from the bar, from shouting down the crowd at satin dolls, did you grab a bottle of jack and smash in the head of a tourist from Iowa filling out postcards?