Kerry's Imperative of the Assonance

from who the hell even knows

I have bruises of mental inflections and reflections of past lives where cries of lives implies that I have died

a thousand times

I tell stories of gory glory

And successes of a hard fought past

In thought,

I am the skeleton of saints,

faceless to show my place of symmetrical secrets and graveyards of angels prove that I’m wingless

She anchors my foot to this planet

I’ve Planned it

I panic that space has not enough room hence these dreams are infinite

When I die,

my thoughts will map the treasures of mental pleasures and flesh will impress the museums of seasons

and come from far and wide to ride the rising tide

My dreams are pain splattered in multicolored ink,

I think of things that blink emotions into existence

My dreams are a series of complexities

A Mirrored mirage of schizophrenic me

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is actually quite deep and emotional. It shows a different side of your writing but still has it uniqueness, or it could be that I am reading your work so much that it just seems normal. hehe Naw this is different. I really liked this piece.

[xjust-for-me.x]

interesting..it speaks for itself.

[Robin]

I'd like to see your passport ..

[Doreen]

Woohoo! Talk about gusto! I feel like I just had the roller coaster ride of my life. ...A mirrored mirage of schizophrenic me.....awesome.

[luciddreamer]

Wow....this one has my mind a swirrling and my heart a beating....pure music...

Peace
Robin

[Gone]

In thought, I am the skeleton of saints, faceless to show my place of symmetrical secrets and graveyards of angels prove that I’m wingless

When I die, my thoughts will map the treasures of mental pleasures and flesh will impress the museums of seasons and come from far and wide to ride the rising tide

What lines. I want to highlight every line in this piece. however these two spoke to me most. the emotion, the articulation, the pure poetry. Awesome.

[An Ordinary Woman]

It reads fast and hard like slam, maybe the best slam I've read in a very long time.
All in one breath too. how do ya do that? awesome.

[Linear]

The use of words used well is to say the least impressive, It's a very well thought out poem, with a good composition, and i truely enjoyed it, thank you! For drawing my attention to you

[Crowley]

When you look deep into what we are as human beings, you'll see alot more of this than the other I think, at least behind the veil. You rip the veil away and prostitue the truth like its two new doctored up breasts. Poke those puppies right in our eyes and ask us if we like them. Great write.

[OT]

brilliant!! the last 3 lines are so empowered!! and the name is brilliant, Imperative of the Assonance (good call Kerry)!!