Thy Way to be Done

mmmm...poetry. makes a great meal

My ideas come in metaphysical mystical madness

In stashes for the ignorant masses

These classes burn turns the phoenix to ashes

And ashes transcend the meanings like flashes

Flash floods can’t drown the atomic titans who clashes

I am ZUES

Thunder bolt throats leaving stains of the echo

I get the last word

And the absurd thoughts read the scripture

Turn your books to page 6-6-5

It’s the brimstone page and it reads like hot fire

“And thus he trashed these fools with rules and left limbs lingering in acid blood pools

Nailed to a cross, riddled in wounds

It spins a subliminal methodical cocoon

And verse after verse the crown grows thorns

Broken in song, but the faithful sing along,

The voices in tune and eclipse the moon

And aliens will swoon in the hum of my harpoon

“Get thee hence, devil! This house is a member of the Clean-sation manifestation

And a cessation of all things

A cessation of all

A cessation

Stop

Reviews

[robyn.alexandra]

I envy your rhymes.
Insightful. Dark. Truthful.
Lacking the sweetness a simple rhyme often brings.
It could well be love that I feel for this. Bravo.

[luciddreamer]

Another awesome write, the subliminal i's &l's ??

[Sean Allen]

Nice flow & rhyme. I read a couple before this one that I liked.

sa

[KellieJeanne]

This is so powerful, far from just s**t. It's emotion spewed words and I love it

[Crowley]

I'd pay for a ticket to hear you do this live......and I would still owe you money. This reads as smooth as any spoken word I have ever read. Great stuff.

[The Raven King]

There is a lot of s**t in here. To be honest I don't have the patience to unravel it all but damn you need a beat and a microphone and 20,000 hands in the air. This is kinetic and powerful and addictive.

[Ruth]

Blimey! lol Hard hitting love! The power in this is overwhelming, and all is unleashed from the exorcised words!
Amazing!
xx

[Robin]

since were playing the favorite line game "Broken in song, but the faithful sing along " ever watch a sheep dog in action , its beautiful

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. My ideas to write came from a wild life testing the world. So many strong lines stood out.
"And thus he trashed these fools with rules and left limbs lingering in acid blood pools
Nailed to a cross, riddled in wounds"
I like how you use the language. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Vivek Koshy]

"My ideas come in metaphysical mystical madness

In stashes for the ignorant masses"

"A cessation of all

A cessation

Stop "


the way to be done.